Post by Hurt on Jan 3, 2007 18:40:03 GMT -5
Dieing Within
I call for your help but you never came,
I ask for forgiveness as the lif drains from my body,
You promised to save me from them,from me,
I look up to heaven and I see you smile,
A single tear slips down my cheek and I pick up the knife,
I bring the blade close and it stabs into my aching heart,
I look back up and you hold out your hand to me,
My body goes limp as my soul leaves it,
I reach out to you, trying to be saved,
Icy hands apear and grab me from behind,
I try grab gold of your hand but I'm being pulled away,
Away from you, away from happiness.
I call for your help but you never came,
I ask for forgiveness as the lif drains from my body,
You promised to save me from them,from me,
I look up to heaven and I see you smile,
A single tear slips down my cheek and I pick up the knife,
I bring the blade close and it stabs into my aching heart,
I look back up and you hold out your hand to me,
My body goes limp as my soul leaves it,
I reach out to you, trying to be saved,
Icy hands apear and grab me from behind,
I try grab gold of your hand but I'm being pulled away,
Away from you, away from happiness.
Ok this is my newest poem so feel free to comment or critize it!
